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by Jennifer, adult ESL learner at Gladwin Language Centre. 23 April 08
I went to Seattle last weekend with my children. I wanted to go on a trip across the Canada- U.S. border. A famous movie, Sleepless In Seattle, was made there, and I wanted to look at some of the places where the movie was shot.
First, I visited a public market, Pike Place Market, which is the oldest public market in the U.S. It is located on a pier. Merchants were selling fresh fruit, vegetables, and many kinds of fish. You can also buy beautiful flowers and unique crafts. Clerks at a fish stall put on an interesting performance, yelling a song and throwing fish over a customer’s head. The marketplace was active and crowded with many people.
Below: The street at the Pike Place Market. This scene appears in the movie "Sleepless in Seattle."

The first Starbucks Coffee is across from the market. It was started in 1978. Originally, espresso coffee was not American style. Italians enjoy espresso standing on the street in the morning. Starbucks let Americans enjoy espresso coffee sitting comfortably in their cafe instead of on the street. The Starbucks café was crowded with many visitors, and the line of people to buy coffee was really long. I was not able to try their coffee.
Below: The first Starbucks in the world! But too crowded to get a cup of coffee! :-(

Another attraction is a restaurant in the Pike Place market. In Sleepless In Seattle, Tom Hanks had lunch with his coworker at the restaurant. It was an old style casual restaurant. A Tom Hanks’ picture and the old article about the movie were posted on the front window, and several people pointed to them and looked into the restaurant. I took some pictures of it and we went in. I ate a seafood dish for lunch looking at the sea through the window.
Below: The restaurant where Tom Hanks ate in "Sleepless in Seattle." You can see the photos of him posted on the window at the bottom, right.)

After lunch, we visited the Seattle Art Museum (SAM). In front of the building the large sculpture, Hammer Man, was standing. Among SAM’s exhibitions, northwest American indian arts are famous. However, my son said that First Nations’ arts at the UBC museum are better than SAM, so we didn’t look at them. I enjoyed the modern art and traditional African exhibitions. They were fantastic. I also looked at the special exhibition, ‘The Roman Art from the Louvre.’
Seattle is a large American city located about 200 km south of Abbotsford. I have walked the street of the famous movie, and I have had lunch at the restaurant just as they did in the movie. Although the weather was bad, it was an interesting trip.



